Thoughts of the Day !!!!

During Miss Chia 's lesson, i was given 2 different compositions - one which Zong Rui wrote and Chester for the other. After I read the two compos , in my opinion, I prefered zong rui's story writing because his story included many useful and sophisticated phrases and words .Althogh there 'love' in that story, i think it's fine with the marker as long as it is not very exaggerating. WhereasChester's compo is very gory and some markers would not like this kind of story. This story was well witten as the paraghaphing and sentence structure is very good.